Saturday, July 28, 2007

country rain

the city rain
grows a smile
under my umbrella
bustled CEOs
with three dollar bargin protection
from the wind
walking so fast
and i, four paces behind
on purpose

suburban children
sitting by windowsills
running the list of
rainy day activities
searching the skies
for a chance to
go out and play again
or children
desperate to pounce in puddles
on purpose

but the country rain
best by far
cuddled on a porch swing
under a blanket
watching the storm
casts your soul
on a one way trip
bound for hush
draws sleepy contentment
to your eyes
makes you thankful
creates desire
to stop time
on purpose

country rain
soft and slow
fast and flooding
anger with lightning
designed
to bear you closer
strip you down
on purpose

i enjoy city rain
and how it exposes true personalities
i cannot belie suburban rain
or the hopefullness it brings
the joy on the childs face
spinning and playing
but the country rain
has captured my soul
and I will fail to reclaim it
on purpose

2 comments:

InkTank said...

exceptional! your thoughts are of a very high standard, and yet so easy to understand, i cud actually feel the city rain, identify it, and effortlessly shifted to country rain....powerful writing danielle!!

Kim said...

Wonderful imagery and contrast here Danielle....